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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-10-06 02:26 PM

   Autumn Dreams

In this Autumn of life
when there is no one left
to lead nor follow
and one walks alone
with the distant sound
of a twilight bell...
when all love and longing
knows only indifference,
memories and dreams
shall remain ever young
as a wide, wild sea
beneath the ageless stars
  and rising moon.

        ---  b. e. adams jr. (10/6/2010)

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-10-06 02:47 PM

Very nice...enjoyed! ebm

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (10-07-2010 09:51 AM).]

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2010-10-06 05:41 PM

There is a coming to terms within this poem, but also bravery and finally cherrished memories that will never be dulled by time...they stay fresh as the day they happened and comfort when most needed...thank you for this fine poem...

Goldenrose.

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2010-10-06 06:23 PM

~feeling this~~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2010-10-07 12:01 PM

Love the new path your poetry has been taking lately, Bruce. Simply superb writing!
Ida

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

5 posted 2010-10-07 08:23 AM

Autumn Dreams indeed. Lovely writing, Bruce.

Enjoyed this!

~Sunkissed

naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

6 posted 2010-10-07 03:11 PM

sad....but very beautiful

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2010-10-07 04:38 PM

Bruce - I think I need to quote a very good poet here. "Sustained applause for this fine penning". It is sad that life should come to this but it does for many of us. I suspect it's for our benefit but I haven't yet figured out how.

Helen

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2010-10-07 05:05 PM

Yes, dear Bruce, you got that right and you said it with your usual mastery.

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

9 posted 2010-10-07 09:09 PM

understanding this,well put. latearrival

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2010-10-08 02:05 AM

Yep, I like this.

A

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