Open Poetry #46 |
Keep Dancing |
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The curtain rises, your audience awaits. ...Start dancing. Opening night, you are the star. ...Keep dancing. The crowd is enthralled, applause, applause! ...Keep dancing. Take your final bow, collect your flowers. ...The dance has ended. Ida Werrett |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like a fine time! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Words to live by ~ and beautifully presented. A |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Ahhh .... the final curtain call!! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I was going to say, "Until tomorrow night!" Yes, keep on keepin' on, please. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
one can take this so many ways...which to me makes for very good poetry, letting the reader take from it what they will.. enjoyed ma'am.. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
DEar Ida, This sounds like a good idea. Love Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok I'm reminded of an article I read on aging gracefully (of course). She starts out saying that in her thirties she was still a rose in bloom. (awww yes) Kind of like the Dance, even when the audience has gone home, it began with outer beauty and ends with a rare inner beauty that makes it all worthwhile. Nice one, Ida~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
dance on!! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This makes me feel HAPPY!!!!!!! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
yes, let's all keep dancing! Kat >^..^< |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Ida - The dance may have ended but the flowers will linger longer. I surely do miss my dancing years. Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The pinnacle of joy, when we have given it all we could ... Impossible to stop dancing ... I believe. Till our last breath! Love this very much, dear Ida. Love, Margherita |
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