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viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-10-01 01:12 AM

My heart is a seed
and you are the water
giving life to my purpose
and purpose to my life

My heart is a seed
and you are the sun
shining love warmth smiles
allowing me to photosynthesize

My heart is a seed
and you are the ground
singing me earth tone lullabies
loving me enough to let me grow within you

My heart is a seed
and we are the tree.

_______________________________________
(blueprint to happiness.. series)

It's been a while. Shaking the rust off.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2010-10-01 02:14 AM

I smile and think how odd that I have not been here and I come in and here is one of my very favorite poets posting poetry. Gotta love it.

A

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

2 posted 2010-10-01 02:47 AM

An interesting poem. I have also written several poems recently around the seed-love metaphor. I find you have done a beautiful, clear and direct job of working out your topic. Bravo.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2010-10-01 07:24 AM

I am always impressed with the insight and depth you are able to showcase in your writing. This one lingers!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-10-01 08:28 AM

Yes, I like what you have done with this! ebm

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2010-10-01 08:05 PM

Hey I love it, the tree I mean!

You're all heart, metal man~

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

6 posted 2010-10-02 08:09 AM

Intertwining verse of poetry, very nice.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2010-10-02 03:19 PM

I always enjoy reading your poetry each time I see your name. It always put a smile or tear on my face.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2010-10-03 09:37 AM

Paul is back and with such a refreshing romantic piece of poetry. If there was ever any sign of rust, you have polished it off to perfection!

Enjoyed this greatly. You were missed.

Love,
Margopargo

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

9 posted 2010-10-04 11:40 PM

Thank you. All of you. Really. I forget what it's like to have people enjoy what you write sometimes.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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