Open Poetry #46 |
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Driftwood |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Driftwood lies upon the golden sand Whiskey in her suntanned hand Contemplating letting go Giving in to the undertow |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nice little piece that let's the reader do what they would with the metaphor... enjoyed ma'am, as always |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
very much appreciate your eyes and words, as always...ebm |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is the call for oneness with All there is ... golden sand and suntanned hand create the contrast to "driftwood" ... all things transform and yearn to dissolve into light filled vastness. Inspiring, dear Eusta! Love, Margherita |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Oh, wonderful. I picture this piece of driftwood as a mermaid with long hair trailing on the sand. A lovely vision. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AHA....good one! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Margherita-I'm glad my little poem said so much to you! ebm |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Bastet-Thanks for sharing your vision. ebm |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Sunshine- thanks my dear friend! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Eusta, Enjoyed reading both poems. I like your style. Very well done! ~Sunkissed ![]() |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thank you Sunkissed, I hope Driftwood continues to please. ebm |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
VERY good one! |
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