Lune1st & 2nd version haiku's on nature

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Open Poetry #46

Lune1st & 2nd version haiku's on nature

ken206573
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0 posted 2010-09-29 05:57 PM

tell me which one you like best

2nd version- haiku#1
It's hot tonight
sunsets to the west
glancing back east

waiting half way
seeing if she would appear
good night Luna

1st version- haiku#2
It's abit cloudy
eyes searching
yet there is no moon

clouds cover the sky
thru it all
she peeks between sheets

2nd version- haiku#3
As the day comes in
I remember you
your stong and gentle wind

the sun greets the day
with a smile
kissing the earth our mother

Margherita
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1 posted 2010-09-30 06:08 PM

Lovely thoughts.

The last one is my favorite.

Love,
Margherita

ken206573
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2 posted 2010-09-30 06:34 PM

thank you for your comment Margherita

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2010-10-02 09:02 PM

Oh I am liking this, the night sky is lovely through your eyes.

Beautiful writing, ken~

Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2010-10-03 03:26 PM

ken, I really like this:

the sun greets the day
with a smile
kissing the earth our mother

Great job ... Marti

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ken206573
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5 posted 2010-10-05 05:13 PM

Thank you Blue Serenade for your comment, I really enjoy the night sky alot especailly the moon and stars.

ken206573
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6 posted 2010-10-05 05:15 PM

Thanks for your comment as well Misty Lilacs. Your not the only one who likes the last haiku.

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