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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2010-09-27 12:34 PM


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It’s  less
Than sixty seconds

Not one minute
And yet there is
Already this something
Intimate between us

By what magic
Using common words
Did you create
This instant world
In which we live

Together alone
Where I can see
With so much
Sudden clarity
Only you
Standing beside

Your smile
Making two
As one conspiratorial
Here under falling
Autumn leaves


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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-09-27 04:34 PM


Very very nice.

M

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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2 posted 2010-09-27 08:01 PM


'tis the gift of the seer. Best wishes!
Balladeer
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3 posted 2010-09-27 08:11 PM


I KNEW there was an old romantic hiding behind that stoic appearance! You do it well, John
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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4 posted 2010-09-28 11:25 AM


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Thanks all

Mike, if it was obvious
I would have been dead meat
decades ago.

Thanks again

John

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