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Open Poetry #46

Skinned In Earthquake

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-09-27 08:12 AM

Butterflies stampede my stomach
Tremoring to my anxious edges
A skinned in earthquake
With confidence crumbled
And thoughts collapsed
Air breathes like water

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-09-27 09:00 AM

Impressive description of anxiety.

Love,
Margherita

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-27 09:45 AM

Margherita thank you, thank you! I was hoping it would resonate with someone. Hugs! ebm

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-09-27 01:16 PM

wow! Yeah I have felt that way before. Good write.

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

4 posted 2010-09-27 01:45 PM

I could sense the tension, and it drew me straight into a thrill.

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-09-27 01:54 PM

passing shadows-I'm realizing that if you can relate to this poem (which is great for me)you have felt this before too (which isn't so great for you) I don't know if I should say thanks or apologize.
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kindredspirit- I'm delighted that it moved you that way!

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