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Open Poetry #46

I Wont Forget You

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-09-20 01:14 AM

I
want you
to know that
a mere three weeks
has not allowed for
my memory of you
to completely diminish.
I can't pass a Barnes and Noble,
read a poem by Chuck Palahniuk,
or listen to The Spill Canvas without
nostalgic thoughts of you flooding my mind.
You taught me not to assume things but
it's hard not to assume the worst
when you were not effected,
or it just seemed that way.
It hurt to let go,
at least for me,
and I wont
forget
you.

*Amber

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-09-21 08:29 AM

always hurts to let go..and sometimes we never forget...

I like the form...

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-21 08:41 AM

It is amazing how time touches the heart...well said. ebm

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-09-26 10:56 PM

Enjoyed...James

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

4 posted 2010-09-26 11:18 PM

Such form play is always of some interest. I'd say to the author, be glad you have been allowed to let go; these days, for various screwed-up reasons, it's not always that easy.

Wouldn't change a thing here - well-composed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-09-27 03:55 AM

yeah, I relate

*sigh*

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

6 posted 2010-09-27 04:44 PM

Thank you everyone for all the feedback!

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