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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2010-09-27 03:06 AM


I am also from the womb
of creative intent
and from the contrariness
of one who journeys mindfully.

I am also from the motherhood,
the sisterhood, et al,
of the blue of sky and oceans wide
that captures the best of me.    

I am also from the knowing
of corners, bends, and curves
formed each into an obstacle
that tests my flexibility.

I am also from the thoughts
of the you, the them and they
loving, indifferent, hateful,
imbibed collectively.  

But I’m also from the heart
of angelic realms divine
who stitched in my unhappiness  
an eternal pressure valve.  

And I’m also from the love
that surpasses understanding
but how loving can love be
when it severs me from you?

Helen / 27 September 2010


© Copyright 2010 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

1 posted 2010-09-27 08:25 AM


Helen-I loved where you went with where you came from...sweet stuff.  ebm

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (09-27-2010 11:06 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-09-27 09:04 AM


quote:
But I’m also from the heart
of angelic realms divine
who stitched in my unhappiness  
an eternal pressure valve.  



Exceptionally beautiful thought. And I loved it all of course. Great, you did it and I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you.
Love,
Margherita

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
3 posted 2010-09-27 09:12 AM


ebm - Thanks so much for your ... sweet comment.

Dear Margherita - I did it for you.  Glad you enjoyed.


Helen

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2010-09-27 09:34 AM


But I’m also from the heart
of angelic realms divine
who stitched in my unhappiness  
an eternal pressure valve.  
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There you go, love that!!

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2010-09-27 11:00 AM


You are also beloved...






Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
6 posted 2010-09-27 03:04 PM


Thanks Bluesy.  Got to listen to what "she" says.

Sunshine - Thank you and, yes, I know but maybe sometimes I only think I know.

Helen  

Amaryllis
Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
7 posted 2010-09-28 04:03 PM


Beautiful, beautiful... your writing is lovely.  
Best~
Amaryllis

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
8 posted 2010-09-28 05:13 PM




Margherita, Bluesy and I share favorite lines Helen!

beautifully done!  

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