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Open Poetry #46

fragile of foliose

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-09-24 11:32 AM

today the shimmer trees are quiet women
without nylons on, standing impatiently
at the virtual brim of oceanic smilage

demonstrating their curve jewelry
and green eye mystery place glances
like dancers staged to be stage trim

there is no wind to strum their songs
no resounding tide to shiver foundations
only some freshly painted quiet white

decorating yawning blue sky drifts of dawn
in pale proper and pasted promenade pause
before a prayer is whispered into breezes

and they catch god's eye in foliated fingers

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daark

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-09-24 11:57 AM

hmmm, not so quiet, everywhere...
but I'm glad it's calm in yours

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-09-24 12:00 PM

thanks lady friend...

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

3 posted 2010-09-24 12:41 PM

Another subtle shift of light
and your palet paints
her softest shades
by your open window
in the Daark

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-09-24 12:53 PM

Heading down to the beach right now, got my cooler, my beach chair and my book.
Think I'll take your poem with me and dream those little dreams.

...you know the ones.

Hugs big guy....Love your stuff!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-09-24 01:18 PM

ms ebm...thanks lady

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babyblue..well if I knew where I would stop by and draw you a smile in the sand...maybe I'll see you at the cantina in old town sometime..thanks for the eyes babyblue

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2010-09-24 03:43 PM

Absolutely awesome imagery provides unique pleasure to the eyes ... a piece to read for x times without ever getting bored.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2010-09-24 03:49 PM

ms mar, thanks lady friend

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