Open Poetry #46 |
Colour and Hue |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Iridescent, I thought as I watched The greens and blues of the dragonfly on my palm Perhaps that is where the secret lies Even bruises heal And same hues need not apply to forever Sometimes the hurts and anger are left behind So even the spirit might learn to fly In time and within The air they are given to breathe One couldn’t capture beauty intent only to own I pondered thinking of how I was content To watch it pass through A simple dragonfly Adding to my life a moment or two To revel in the way it sat And saw me through a thousand eyes Maybe she too has learned to soar And those colors I abhorred now find Their sheen to be one of pleasing hue If I closed my fist before it would die And I have never meant to harm This delicate creature of now and musings Or the her I’d come to know Through time and dreams I moved my hand and watched it fly Hoping she too was well and warm Within the colors she now wore Of Home |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Well sir, I loved this. I have a special thing for dragon flies as they have come to sit on me at special times (or is their sitting what made the time special?) Warmed my heart, this one did..Thank you very much. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Thank ma'am... for the eyes on this scribble.. I think a number of people have an affinity to dragonflies..and they do indeed seem to be special.. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
A beauty for sure, Captain. Enjoyed this. ~Sunkissed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
http://www.animaltotem.com/dragonfly.html "The power of Dragonfly lies in its ability to see around things by looking from different angles. Using its ability to transform colors and lights by reflecting and refracting them, Dragonfly shows us that life, like light, can bend, shift, and adapt in various ways, making life's appearance never be what it appears to be. Dragonfly's magic shows us to see through life's illusions and find our true vision. It calls us to transform within our lives and reminds us to feel deeply so we will have the compassion necessary to help ourselves and others." Your poem is most assuredly a Love from one dragonfly lover to another, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oops a daisy! ...NOW it's saved! ~ I'd forget my proverbial halo if it weren't attached! lol P.S. Does your dragon fly? Linda |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Scribbles, you say? Your art is the kind that finds and releases. Even the aspect of tension is delicately winged. It's there, as an important ingredient, but only to free your thoughts and your subject. I'm happy you decided to post this one, today. Always a fine read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just smiling here because I know |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Just so gorgeous...Cpat... ~A |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
many thanks to all of you for the eyes on this and your kind replies... thank you poets... sincerely |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
capt..I have never seen a dragon fly other than on the screen..but I bet they could before eve ruined them by blaming them for the apple..(grin) enjoyed it !! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Quite elegantly stated, Cpat. You captured the magick of dragonflies and poetry here. Ida |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Absolutely beautiful and delightful! Thank you for sharing ... ooxx Marti |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~just lovely~~~
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
That Dragonfly stole my breath when it flew away. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
delicate colors beautiful wings |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sparkling write, sensitive and charming. Love, Margherita |
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