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I am from (inspired by Amaryllis)
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I am from (inspired by Amaryllis) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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I am from a table dancing woman dream skirts awhirl a desire I am from a hush-hush slipping past a french door leaving a tinge and a broken heart I am from the night wail of the fog horn darkness overtaking light quiet things creeping on sand I am from the smell of marsh dusty blue smoke of unwelcome morning I am from a sly seed hiding cracking open exploding |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very nicely done! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
You ladies are great. I love where you are coming from...I love the imagery in simple verse. Great stuff! ebm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kate, my friend... we need to duet!  I especially enjoyed the second and last stanzas! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, yes you are! This is so very special, I love it! Just a peek into you, but so very "explosive"! Love, Margherita  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
wow ... so many grand 'reply' postings to the fine initial 'write' ! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am from a sly seed hiding cracking open exploding (smiling) and what a place it is you come from ma'am..... truly enjoyed |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you are and you are more |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If my "senior moment" had lasted much longer I would have missed this and I would certainly have been the loser. Certainly a wonderful write. Loved it all! Helen |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love your opening verse, it is so poetically you. Much enjoyed this glimpse of you, sweet lady~ |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh loving this, Lady! So spare and eloquent, yet so loaded with meaning... I adore the last strophe!  Popcorn=enthusiasm for life... divine!!!  Best to you~ Amaryllis |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you so much Kat! And I love your kind words ebm. We definitely do need to duet Karilea! Margherita, I appreciate you so much. They certainly are all wonderful writes poet! Thank you so very much Cpat Hair! Helen! I so am happy to see you here! Thank you! Thank you Honeybunch! Bluesy, thank you very much! Amaryllis, you were the original inspiration for this! Thank you! |
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