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Abe
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0 posted 2010-09-20 04:49 PM


The Heart Would Have No Feelings

The heart would have no feelings
If, it would never have the ache
Of, the loss of a love inside
When lost, that makes it break.

Though, we all know those feelings
Are only found there, in our mind
When, a true love graces us
It’s in some place, a special kind.

We can try to get feelings past it
And, tell ourselves, that it is gone
But, find there’s nothing we can do
When it just lives, on and on.

For some of us, the lucky few
It’s a very wonderful, thing
Even, with all the heartache
That, those special heartbeats bring.

When you think about that love
Every single minute, of the day
It makes the mind and heart
Do, those tricks, that, they can play.

Tick, tock, tick, tock, goes the time
The mind searches for the cure
While the heart aches, each beat
For that love, so sweet and pure.


09.19.2010

Del "Abe" Jones
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-09-21 11:01 AM


Dear Abe, I so love your romantic, sensitive side. This is most beautifully written.

Very much enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-09-21 09:48 PM


Very nice, especially the last stanza.
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