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Open Poetry #46
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dollmaker
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since 2006-08-30
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mass dorchester
0 posted 2010-09-15 01:25 PM



SWEET BABY,
WHERE DID YOU COME FROM?
HEAVEN ABOVE?
SO FILL YOUR MOTHER HEART WITH LOVE.
YOU ARE A BLESSING.
MADE BY LOVE AND TENDERNESS.
YOU ARE MOM'S JOY.
YOU MAKE BLISS WITH EACH TINY BABY KISS.
LOVE, KERRI KEITH'S FRIEND.
© Copyright 2010 kerri miceli - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-09-16 05:55 AM

STOP SHOUTING your poems and you may get more responses. Many people (myself included)are turned off by writing all in large caps.
It makes it hard to read and is distracting.
Just a helpful hint. Cute poem anyway.
Kat >^..^<
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2010-09-16 04:37 PM

This is sweet, dear Kerri.

Love,
Margherita
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-09-21 11:44 PM

I am sure that babies make bliss with each  kiss.   This is one of those poems that makes you sigh in a good way. ---- If you want to change the cap thing, I am fairly certain that it is possible.  
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