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Clone Frankenstein
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Clone Frankenstein |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Clone Frankenstein There are no poems to read or songs to sing For the Clone Frankenstein How typical! Neither a human being nor a true monster is he Such is the fate of a Clone Frankenstein How pitiful! Each night the creature has many a misadventure Alone always alone How comically depressing! The Clone Frankenstein bleeds softly over window panes For these are the tears of a pseudo-monster man How toxic! Ore ga kananashi These are the words of the Kuron Furankenshutain How unintelligible! Pseudo-death will wander into his shade For the end awaits the living or the dead How confusing! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is profound, somehow disquieting, but also very sad. ... and very well written! Love, Margherita |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
This was a very unique topic and you really did it well and I really liked it a lot..Really! ebm |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Thank you. This grew out of a joke in that my wife often calls me `Clone Frankenstein.` She was feeling out of sorts one day so I ended up writing this extremely bizarre poem. I`m not sure it cheered her up that day but she is okay now. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
WOW.....I do believe i heard about this cloning mishap how sad very sad lol ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is always wonderful to know the genesis of a poem... I hope it pleased your wife, that you could poke fun at yourself... it's not always easy when our spouses don't understand our need to write... in whatever genre we choose.  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your wife refers to you as clone Frankenstein???  Sounds like a match made in Heaven! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
A some what disturbing poem but it makes you stop and think. Kat >^..^< |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
My wife may love me but as for the poem she says, `Sho mo nai.` which means awful. It is great to have a critic in the family because it keeps you from becoming pretentious. ----- Lost readers struggle through a Clone Frankenstein poem---Hoping it will end, always hoping---How burdened! |
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