Open Poetry #46 |
I am From ... (Also Inspired by Amaryllis) |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am from hauling wood on cold fall mornings As an outside fire crackles the chill from the air And creates misty-smoke clouds on a raw day I am from squabbles, shouts and songs sung That skirted low-bush blueberry bushes I am from dishpans and water buckets And frozen springs in winter Cold hands warmed by cups of cocoa While eclectic musical choices spilled From windows and doors (Opera danced well with bagpipes) I am from volatile tempers Swinging from emotional highs and lows Harsh words brushed aside With kisses and hugs and cookies I am from run-on sentences, belly laughter And monsters under my bed I am from the mountains thrust from volcanoes From an inlet spanning clam beaches I am from a land that never grows dark And a land blind to the light As the north wind drifts doors shut I am from Lupine and hayfields And the first Violets of spring dainty in tall grass I am from horses, dogs and cats everywhere A life of chaotic joy and tomorrow dreams I am from a story yet complete - Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (09-20-2010 12:30 AM).] |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh you did one too, Alison! I love it! This is such a pleasure to read... oh-so-full of crisp images, giving us a glimpse of the beauty you live in... splendidly done . Best~ Amaryllis |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you ~ you inspired me. A |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
And I`m delighted and humbled that anything I scribble could inspire, A... this is so much better than mine; I adore it |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have to disagree with you .. yours was fine, so fine. A |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
These..the original and the inspirations, are all lovely... there is when one looks at where we are from..a lot of common areas. beautifully done ma'am.. and a pleasure to read |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Alison-I'm so glad you joined in on this! you did not disapoint! It was wonderfully full of color, characters and life! Thanks for sharing! ebm |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
Can such a wonderful place exist? You took me to somewhere totally unlike anywhere I have been before...thank you I loved this & am going to read Amaryllis' original posting. Julie |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Alison,another great "I am" poem. Sounds like you. A pleasure to read. latearrival |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Dear Alison, I love everything in this poem and the above quoted is just fantastic. I didn't want this to end ... it's so nice to discover more of us. Now and for always Alaska will be associated with Alison in my mind and heart. Love and hugs, beautiful poetess. Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what a beautiful picture your words draw Alison I am from being enchanted with this |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again, I didn't want it to end, dear Alison. Just love it! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
great 'reply' posting to a fine initial idea and 'write'! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Alison - This is truly wonderful and an absolute pleasure to read! Helen |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I can't believe that I failed to thank any of you for your replies. Sometimes, I am just thoughtless. Thank you - this is one of my favorite poems - thank you. A |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Hey, Ali? How did I even happen on this one? I know you can't take me with you, but you just did. Love, Daddygoose |
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