Open Poetry #46 |
Bedroom Eyes |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
My sexy man with bedroom eyes Just one look and the battle's begun But I can tell him no lies He's already won He gazes deeply into my eyes With that smoldering look It penetrates my soul and I sigh He's got me hooked His sensual look says...I want you! My feelings I try to hide But I want him too So my love for him I confide With passion filled eyes He captures my heart Surrender he cries I was yours from the start With those sexy eyes Just one look and I melt I give up willingly and sigh More loved I have never felt My sexy man with those bedroom eyes |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Now I have to stop and fan! |
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The Sky is Imagination Junior Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 25OK, US |
Very well said and passionate! |
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HeliaHeart Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 53Georgia |
Ooh, that was heady and interesting. Well written! |
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Eterne Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 75Quebec, Canada |
Very sweet! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thank you all. I wrote this to my boyfriend because he has bedroom eyes. He loved it! Kat >^..^< |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
of course he did and he loves you too, I'd wager nice work Kat |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
How fortunate the author is to have such a generous and attractive lover. May it long be so. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very pretty |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hmmm, very nice. Gotta love them bedroom eyes, huh. A |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
I can even hear the moans and pleading cries, The elemental passion's sighs. The wordless singing of desire! Karen! |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Karen!!!!!! This is Daddygoose. It must be the living spirit of the mountain Speaking silently as well. :-------) Daddygoose |
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