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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-09-14 02:49 PM


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Again
You are happy

In your mind
There is a romance
Between the two of us
That no one else can see

Our nine to five
Excluding overtime
Distills to instants
Not so random
In their routines
We pass each other by

Mutual smiles
The brief hello
Fragile magic ephemerals
That tint the office
Fluorescent  air
A particular shade of blue

And how I know
There is nothing
I really need to do

Indeed this less
Is so much more
Any actual words or act
Would break the spell
And then what would
We have or be

So let her star
Guide narrow Guinevere
The weary knight
Be not too sadly logical

What harm is done
Feeling younger than we are
In this legend by the sea


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katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-09-14 11:40 PM


Nicely done, enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-09-15 09:02 AM


quote:
What harm is done
Feeling younger than we are
In this legend by the sea



Very nice. The best thing is to ignore age ... at heart level time has its very own pace!

Love,
Margherita


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