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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
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0 posted 2010-09-13 08:01 AM




In the fleeting still between
Hummingbird’s beating wings
Rabbit’s pounding heart…
In the instant increments of nada
Serenity sifts through
Nature’s eye of the needle
So sudden sometimes
This nature of nada
Like lightning strikes
My soul
Soothing
In that silence
In those spaces
Those calm places
My heart rests
Easy
Feeling
Yours


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1 posted 2010-09-13 08:09 AM


very nice...
such moments one ccan feel another's heart or the divine... always seem to me to be those in between...

enjoyed.

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-09-13 08:14 AM


Thanks sir...The trick is finding/allowing the betweens to sustain you.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2010-09-13 03:07 PM


Yes, Eusta, That's the trick alright. I like your style,
                              Ida

Eusta B. Mae
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4 posted 2010-09-14 08:15 AM


Thanks Ida, I like yours too!
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2010-09-15 09:34 AM


quote:
In the fleeting still between
Hummingbird’s beating wings
Rabbit’s pounding heart…
In the instant increments of nada
Serenity sifts through
Nature’s eye of the needle
So sudden sometimes
This nature of nada
Like lightning strikes
My soul
Soothing
In that silence
In those spaces
Those calm places
My heart rests
Easy
Feeling
Yours



Wonderfully expressed. My favorite of yours.

Love,
Margherita

rosepetals36
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since 2010-07-09
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6 posted 2010-09-15 09:47 AM


Would you mind if I steal a few of those peaceful moments since I cant find some of my own? lol I liked!

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
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7 posted 2010-09-15 11:08 AM


Margherita-Well, thank you very much for letting me know how much you liked it! You're a sweetheart!  ebm
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Rosepetals36- those moments are there...it just gets tricky when they are so fleeting they slip under our radar.  Keep your heart open (even when it hurts) Hugs ebm

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