Open Poetry #46 |
In The Fleeting Still Between |
Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
In the fleeting still between Hummingbird’s beating wings Rabbit’s pounding heart… In the instant increments of nada Serenity sifts through Nature’s eye of the needle So sudden sometimes This nature of nada Like lightning strikes My soul Soothing In that silence In those spaces Those calm places My heart rests Easy Feeling Yours |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... such moments one ccan feel another's heart or the divine... always seem to me to be those in between... enjoyed. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thanks sir...The trick is finding/allowing the betweens to sustain you. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, Eusta, That's the trick alright. I like your style, Ida |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Thanks Ida, I like yours too! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderfully expressed. My favorite of yours. Love, Margherita |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Would you mind if I steal a few of those peaceful moments since I cant find some of my own? lol I liked! -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Margherita-Well, thank you very much for letting me know how much you liked it! You're a sweetheart! ebm -------------------------------------------- Rosepetals36- those moments are there...it just gets tricky when they are so fleeting they slip under our radar. Keep your heart open (even when it hurts) Hugs ebm |
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