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still wondering |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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Only awake when I'm sleeping still wondering if he wonders and worrying that he doesnt hoping on wishes and wishing at empty wishing wells throwing in pennies as u listen ..... did they hit bottom? does the well reach hell? did the rope find the water or hang jus out of reach? do my memories still dance across the shore or did they die somewhwhere in bitterness and stuing on the other side of nowhere as I shed ..... who I once was and ..... reminence again ..... about ..... what I never had ..... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always on the other side of windows huh...could see your sighs showing lady! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
don't memories always dance ma'am? sometimes to a waltz, and sometimes to a slower tune.... enjoyed.... |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I LOVE the last 3 lines! I liked the rest of it too! -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Eterne Member
since 2010-07-21
Posts 75Quebec, Canada |
Beautiful. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done! Kat >^..^< |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Dark stranger, It does seem that way yes alway watching thru my window....glad u liked it! Cpat Hair, Glad u like it as well .... mine would prob dance to that slower tune u mentioned .... Rose petals, Glad u liked it I actually used those last three lines in another poem of mine trying to start some themes thruout my poems see what I come up with thnx for reading  ... Eterne, Beautiful??? wasnt the comment I expected but im glad u thought so... :0) Katahdin, I usually ryhme more thruout my poems but Im trying to get aaway from ryhming every line I liked the way this one flowed tho it worked thnx for reading!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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