Open Poetry #46 |
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Duet with a Flower Girl [2002] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
She stands, hearing me, on the other side of the Rockies Her voice travels in song waves, with no slip of travail E'en when my wailing takes me to my knees Listening is to hear the sun through the gale And northern wind, blow me ever away Such sweet depth of thought is not constrained For only one can hear what this heart would say Into the mind like piano's fingered refrain And the echo lies within the valley's core The cry and laughter fly with harmonies wings That I would sing this song of you, forevermore Then like listening wind I have learned how to sing My gratitude to our Flower Girl, Martie, whom in duet, makes us all fly... And I repost in honor of her, and in hopes that she is soon feeling better...mend that ankle, dear! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
What a treat Sunshine! Thanks for sharing. ebm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sweet!!! ![]() |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sweet, Karilea! Get well quickly, Martie! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks Sissie....and and poet friends here...Sure do appreciate the thoughts and well wishes. ![]() |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully done! Get well quickly, dear Martie! Love and hugs to both. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh that's so nice!! The distance between us is so close, if we just listen... and write our hearts out! I can tell you two share a special bond, and it's heartwarming, truly!!! |
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