Open Poetry #46 |
Autumn Evening Forest |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Autumn Evening Forest Beyond a golden September setting sun as the twilight curtain falls on this forest evening world painted in stars and velvet moonlit shadows, all is mellifluous and melancholy beauty for one, in vain, alone. --- b. e. adams (9/11/2010) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The rapturous beauty of your writing always over shadows the melancholy thought behind it, Bruce. Ida |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
You paint a pretty picture with your words -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful with a stroke of reality there to brace up the lonely in beauty. Eric |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You convey such peaceful beauty and a sense of lonliness that is hard to miss.... Truly gorgeous poetic scenery, as always. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The blending of melancholy with beauty is so perfectly expressed here, dear Bruce. Love, Margherita |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Most things in nature are often best viewed alone. Being within it and solitary makes you appreciate it better as i appreciate this well written poem...thank you for it.. Goldenrose. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You sing the solo well, Bruce ~ with eloquence and beauty. A |
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