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Open Poetry #46

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-09-10 02:19 PM

Forgotten

We are still just the same
Even after all these years

Still looking for a name
To place upon our fears

A boogie man to blame
Not what is in our mirrors

We just don't feel the shame
Or care about the tears

To gone from wince we came
As everything nears

Forgotten all the same
Redemption disappears

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-09-10 03:20 PM

There is something haunting about this that makes it wonderfully too close for comfort. Touching. ebm

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-09-10 08:46 PM

I won't say hang in there, Juju, but do endeavor to persevere!

This really is a bit of a haunting write, so I do appreciate that when you deliberately substitute spellings (such as "wince" for whence), you do so up-front and honestly. Thanks.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2010-09-11 04:11 AM

wow

awesome

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-09-22 04:51 AM

Redemption disapppears is quite a thing to say but if individuals choose to play the blame on everything and everyone except themselves than they truly are lost.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2010-09-23 11:37 AM

"Still looking for a name
To place upon our fears"

True that all across the globe...do ppl really ever change???

~~~kingsangel~~~

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