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whispers of the laurel tree |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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old boards of the wrinkle wood moan hollow and heavenly like kentucky sighs with texas shine sip salvation the laurel tree woman dances ballroom in her jaunty bare foot in oh jesus jeans with sooth sin simmering a lexes perhaps her smile, white wide and classy cash seduction with right wing kind of proper lady luxury she waits for the neptune man to do his easy whispering and take her away to promised lands without angry boarders her fingers blend the dark brown buttons like jewelry she wears the eyes of whispering knights in leather like tattoos that wash off when she folds her prayers into comfortable colors that are slow dancing persuasions thunder leans at her alley brim on some monday mornings she leans into the burgundy of dawn with fog stilettos and climbs a gypsy wheeled mind like stairways to maybe playing the hands she wears under her sleeves like aces that make look back glances shimmer of gold coast religion ________________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-10-2010 07:17 AM).] |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Be careful, Sir... The boards and others might be watching...  Of course, we know, you welcome windows.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thanks lady wit smile eyes |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
D-Part of your gift is the way you can paint women every color of the rainbow and capture every shadow of their shapes. Pen on Dark one! ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ebm...thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Incredible imagery! Fascinating read. Love, Margherita  |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Mmm, another smooth one, Dark... jus so lovely ~A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend __________________ a'mary, thanks for the eyes ms |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as always ...well done sir. such moments you paint with a sensual and delicate air... truly enjoy your talent |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat...humble thanks amigo |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I like as always -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
love your work as always. Exceptional! Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
rosepet...thanks so much lady ________________ et..thank you for the read and comment |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This gave me chills I love it!!! Still listening for those whispers thru the screams that r heard so clearly. Great write as usual my dark stranger!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...thanks lady..enjoy the leather for the next few weeks? |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
thunder leans at her alley brim on some monday mornings she leans into the burgundy of dawn with fog stilettos and climbs a gypsy wheeled mind like stairways to maybe playing the hands she wears under her sleeves like aces ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ well heck you are so good!! just hugs, big guy!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue...thanks lady friend |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Your wordplay is magical. Truly a gift. There's always something there to ponder and collect as jewels of thought. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms wood..thanks ms whispers.. |
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