Open Poetry #46 |
letting go |
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Children grow and no one knows at their birth where their lives will go we hold them close when they are scared when they are just two years old when they are three we leave the light on to scare the ghosties away not a night goes by at four or five when you don't wake up with them in your bed the sleepovers at six, seven and eight that you think will never end the questions you never thought they'd ask at the way too young age of ten before your eyes they'e growing up and now are facing the world on thier own with so many dreams still so ripe going into a world that's already torn... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
wonderful summery of the tender years, kingsangel. I know of no one who could bright those years to life better than this. Excellent writing. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Why thank you so much for your kind words.....I have kids that range in age from 18 years to 16 months....was having a moment of reflection I guess.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king...people puppies are always special when we look at them through look back eyes...enjoyed your fragile here ms |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
....and that's the way life is, Julie. You say it well... |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanks a bunch you are both very kind and to be graced by the presence of you both at the same time I feel special... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the second read LOL I might even come back for a third |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
That is the best "been there done that" as only a mom can write. I've got a 32-13 yr spread between my 3 kids... I know where you are coming from. Great write! ebm |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Bravo! Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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