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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-09-02 02:15 PM

Heaven Without Ears

Warm murmurs
In tender talked places
Without words
In the creases and crevices
Of caressed conversation
Places that hear
Its heaven
Without ears

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-09-02 02:26 PM

ah.... nicely done ma'am... enjoyed...

now that you saw what your words inspired...it is gone so as not to sully your thread with someone elses scribblings....

certainly..hope it didn't offend. :-)

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-09-02 02:34 PM

I enjoyed your disapearing ink, I'm honored. You most certainly did not offend. ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

3 posted 2010-09-02 02:47 PM

Cpat- you could post that little scribble ya know.ebm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-09-02 02:51 PM

Ma'am.. I scribbled and when I made it dissapear, I didn't save it.. often the case with me.... a passing thought, no more..

I can take another stab at it if it pleases you, but I assure you it will coem out differently if I do.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-09-02 03:02 PM

No, I'm flattered you scribbled just on a whim for me...There is no need to try to recreate the moment...thanks just the same. ebm

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2010-09-02 04:19 PM

Warm worded whispers
Murmured silently into the creases of us
Transform the unspoken vowels at end of tongue
To an intimate sentence served
In slow passing time on sheets
Crisply folded along
The pillowed side of heaven

here you go... (chuckling)
sorry it took so long, I had to take a conference call which lasted a little over an hour..

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

7 posted 2010-09-02 08:50 PM

Beautiful, both of them... even the sonics behave appropriately here.. enjoyed!

~A

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2010-09-02 11:24 PM

Short and sweet and so true.
Sometimes words just get in the way.

Liked this very much~

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

9 posted 2010-09-03 12:15 PM

Niiiice...

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

10 posted 2010-09-03 08:19 AM

Amaryllis-Glad our sonics were on their best behavior.
____________________________________________
BluesSerenade- Yes they do. ebm
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Andrew Scott-thaaaaaaaaaanks! ebm

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (09-03-2010 09:56 AM).]

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

11 posted 2010-09-03 08:21 AM

Chuckles (Cpat)Thanks for the beautiful poem and yes you are right-it is close. ebm

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

12 posted 2010-09-04 09:32 PM

dreamy ebm, so dreamy

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

13 posted 2010-09-07 08:27 AM

The Lady-thanks for the eyes here. ebm

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