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botherhood of splinters |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it wasn't only my dissatisfaction with caustic cowboys that provided the verve to help instill their absolution it was more just the afternoon being disgustingly parched and that laborsome walk to the quarters for horses and cows wyatt already knew well, as I had always stated sincerely that I was born in the wrong era for genteel happiness still he beckoned me away from my contentment of whiskey and a hand full of kate’s aces, or at least 3's or perhaps 4's he borrowed my favorite gift from the brother masterson and gave me instead some soiled double barreled heathen to hide beneath my coat and then expose like private parts with a blaze of attention gathering poetry there, later on he stated we should all wait until they began the debate so the onlookers might give justice to our deliberation but my whiskey was becoming quite restless by then and I imagined my kate was also having urges of indecency so beginning their ending most certainly seemed to be timely _______________ daark (nursery rhymes of john henry holliday) ok corral stunt or exercise in boredom. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-31-2010 10:11 AM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Write boredom on my watch anytime. Love this - but what haven't I loved that you wrote? I'd have to go back and check and I am too damned lazy. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ali-san, always a pleasure to see your oatmeal coated fingerprints on my trailer hitch. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I don't know how much pen whiskey is left in that bottle, but don't stop till the last drop. ebm. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms ebm..it seems to refill pretty fast..something about mirrors I guess |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Reads like there's more to this story. If so, definitely share. Enjoyed! ~Sunkissed  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I agree, this seems to be only a little piece of a very interesting series you are writing? If so, where is the one about Kitty?  Loved this. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You are the dark master for capturing in words individuals born in the wrong era, who refuse to enjoy genteel happiness. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Very smooth. Though my unsophisticated mind often has difficulty with your content, this one I get. That’s not to say that this piece is anything less than your norm in quality and form, just that I’ve had enough spirits this evening to make it work for me. Perhaps knowing something of the background on this also helps. A toast to you and yours Dark One. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunkiss..thanks am sure more will ooze out. _______________ ms myst,,the nose of mary kate (down the list a bit here) is about doc's kate...perhaps you were thinking of gunsmoke and ms kitty? thanks lady friend ____________________ eb, thanks for the glances here..I appreciate your reviews _____________________ andrew, thanks much for the reads...glad I was able to do some "docspeak" that worked. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
he borrowed my favorite gift from the brother masterson and gave me instead some soiled double barreled heathen to hide beneath my coat and then expose like private parts with a blaze of attention gathering poetry interesting that the only one to go down and stay down in that fight, that is without other shots being fired into them...was the one who got hit by that heathen... your description here...both poetic and fitting,especially in the twist of what it spouts as poetry.. enjoying the series sir... glad I found this one. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat..thanks amigo...doc always said his doubletalk was deadly.. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Enjoying the series, keep it coming! Kat >^..^< |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Botherhood? Love it!  ~A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Kat..thanks lady ____________ Amary, it has a few more rhymes, thanks |
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