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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-08-27 11:04 PM

beyond all loss and time

Against an ebony-velvet sky
a giant, pale amber moon
hangs on the cusp of Autumn,
while a cool evening mist
dances with the trailing
scents of Summer passing
and a quiet, delicious transience
stirs in traceless whispers
that echo through the pensive
stillness of a lonely heart.
Dare we tempt the distance
beyond all loss and time?

--- b. e. adams (8/27/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-08-27 11:40 PM

I like your descriptions of summer passing into Autumn. Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2010-08-28 12:14 PM

"Dare we tempt the distance beyond all loss and time?" From the beauty of nature to the edge of eternity. Only The Poet can take us there.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-08-28 05:04 AM

A most beautiful meditative offering, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2010-08-28 07:42 AM

Beautifully written.

Enjoyed reading.

~Sunkissed

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2010-08-28 11:49 AM

Your poetry in all it's beauty is truly a wonder to me.

Always look forward to reading you, dreampoet~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

6 posted 2010-08-29 04:02 AM

Yes! Dare to do so. Any hurt it causes, is less than the hurt of not daring.

Lovely poem, Bruce.

Owl

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2010-08-29 12:16 PM

I have missed reading your highly poetic offerings on Nature, Poet Man! I read them ~ then I whisper them...

Sending an appreciative hug your way,

Linda

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