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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
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southbend, WA

0 posted 2010-08-26 12:05 PM



An Eternal Darkness has begune.
It is hard for most to see.
Only a few notice a thing.
Most are blinded by the Governments lies.
Soon it will come to Light.
There is very few good left in this World.
This time the Darkness will control all.
Unless more see the Light.
The Eternal Darkness shall not be broken.
Its hold is far to strong.


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2010-08-26 01:09 AM


Sadly, I believe you may be right, Eric.
                                   Ida

Elric
Junior Member
since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
2 posted 2010-08-26 01:11 AM


yes, but i hope not.
rosepetals36
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since 2010-07-09
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3 posted 2010-08-26 10:13 AM


Unfortunately I can agree with your veiwpoint. I hope like you we are wrong!

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness!

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