Open Poetry #46 |
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A So-called Love |
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therightside Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 64USA |
You're too late Too much was done As I drown I can feel my last breath creeping up Eternal is the repetition of every repercussion A better life floats on as I sink beneath the weight of a so-called love The current of your mistakes consume the space between my toes I am rooted in the depths of dysfunction Persistent whispers remind, 'You're never enough' Waves of your words rush over as crushing as ever, knock me to the ground Defeated... on my knees scratching and scraping, searching for one ounce of myself Only the silence of scars exist your erosion has taken its toll Mind and body, worn So fragile, so frail Left, only a shell where my former hopes my pride, my dignity were once held |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a painful write... and surely not love if it tears apart so completely... |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
u must have been hurt very badly......... such a hard poem to write but a good one. |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I'm so sorry for the pain you must be feeling. Love can be so cruel can't it? I am going to be starting a divorce soon, and this write so captures what I feel and how it can tear you down. -- Used to be rosepetals25 ![]() |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
*Hugs* to therightside, and to rosepetals... True love should build up not tear down. ~Sunkissed. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write... JL ![]() |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Very nice. Love the raw emotion here. |
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