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rosepetals36
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0 posted 2010-08-25 02:22 PM



Tick Tock

Slowly
the clock tick tocks.
Minutes hardly moving
Droopy eye lids struggling to
stay open and alert
as time drags by
slowly.

<b>-- Used to be rosepetals25 before I tried to change my email lol</b>

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1 posted 2010-08-25 02:26 PM


(chuckling) sounds like it has been a long afternoon.... boredom and now clock watching....  

I hope the rest goes quickly for you....

rosepetals36
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2 posted 2010-08-25 02:34 PM


A hour and a half to go!  I'm at a employment center where I have to put in 8 hours a day... it takes like 40 minutes to go through the job listings... and then... you sit.. and sit... and sit.. lol. Almost done though!

<b>-- Used to be rosepetals25 before I tried to change my email lol</b>

easy1
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3 posted 2010-08-25 08:12 PM


It can seem a ghastly waste, I know (and as the bard penned, "I know not seems.") When the expletives deleted can't take anything else, they deign to take one's time.... but it'll all even out in the end!


Nice choice of form to evoke, evince, and otherwise smack down that arrogant clock face!

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