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Open Poetry #46

Uncaging my mind

PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2010-08-24 03:16 AM

And the structure of my life seems to crumble away
My anchors sinking deeper into the ocean of life
Slowing my roll to a stop
Allowing me to gaze up at the stars for once
Breathe in the serenity of pure silence
Feel the breeze run through your fingertips
Run on the clouds, and dance with the rain
Touch the edge of reality

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2010-08-26 04:38 AM

descriptive write!

cant believe it got passed up but some of mine do too...

thanks for sharing

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

2 posted 2010-08-26 09:11 AM

Enjoyed the thoughts expressed in this poem. You take the reader right along with you.

Nicely done!

~Sunkissed

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