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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
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0 posted 2010-08-24 03:05 AM



     

I find no comfort in the days,
not in the wind or sunshine rays,
not in the creek flowing on and on,
not in the sky when light is gone.

There is a little soothing in music,
a bit of ease in a glass of wine,
I catch myself staring off, daydreaming
of when everything will be just fine...

when you will be home
all of the time.


© Copyright 2010 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-08-24 07:08 AM


ah~~ well captured ma'am... and may you find the peace and time to spend with him.


Margherita
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2 posted 2010-08-26 04:54 AM


How I understand this, dear Dixie.

"... when everything will be all right." Will it ever be? But if we dedicate some time to work in that direction, dreams might indeed manifest.

Very profound and touching write.

Love,
Margherita

Sunkissed
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3 posted 2010-08-26 09:12 AM


Beautiful flow of words, Dixie, I've missed reading you.

Enjoyed!

~Sunkissed

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