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Open Poetry #46

boardom at night

kudanesh
Member

since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2010-08-24 12:27 PM

My eyes have swelled like balloons,
Their no longer red their maroon.
I should go to bed,
But I play games in stead
And cry when the sun drowns the moon.

My head is all groggy and slow,
Like a freight train caught in the snow.
Thoughts trickle through my mind,
Mulled over and refined,
As the sun is starting to show.

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-08-24 05:41 AM

Ah, but may you sleep well tonight.

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

2 posted 2010-08-25 01:06 PM

Nights, where the problems of the day come back to haunt us and we find ourselves praying for daylight to come and wash the pain away. Liked this.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-08-25 06:55 PM

My head is all groggy and slow,
Like a freight train caught in the snow.

Loved this, dear Andrew. Very good imagery.

Love,
Margherita

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