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Letters from my heart
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Letters from my heart |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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Hello my sweetest angel I hope this letter finds you well I can not say that I am doing good As this time apart from you has been hell I spend every night Just staring up at the sky Holding back a wall of sadness And trying not to cry I wonder if you're thinking of me If you miss me as I miss you Or if thoughts of me have faded away Have you bid my memory adieu I think of your sweet kiss And how it lingers in my soul Tears are running down my face As my emotions lose control I think of us laying together Your body snuggled next to mine Our hearts became one If almost by design The way you would always whisper I love you baby, into my ear There was so much love behind your voice It was always genuine and sincere I remember looking deep in your eyes Seeing the true beauty within I would tell you I love you too And give you a playful grin How I miss you so much Words can't describe how much I miss you As the tears fall from my eyes I wish we would have never parted I wish we never said goodbye You told me you needed time You had to find yourself and search your soul With that you were gone And my heart had a giant hole I know I shouldn't be writing you And that I should give you your time But life without has no reason My life without you has no rhyme I don't know what you're thinking right now Or whats going on inside your head All I wish is that I was next to you Instead of alone in this bed Well my dear I will end this letter I hope to see you soon Blowing kisses in your direction As I look up at the stars and moon I love you very much my angel In my heart you will always be For I will always love you I just hope you still love me... |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
"I wonder if you're thinking of me If you miss me as I miss you Or if thoughts of me have faded away Have you bid my memory adieu" Those lines were my favorite, though the entire poem was amazing. Well written, and very expressive, thank you for sharing it. |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed it. And I am glad that it didn't come across as mindless babble on my part.  |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very beautiful and touching. I can feel the emotions in this heartfelt poem. I'm suprised it didn't get more replies so..... (BUMP) back to the to it goes. Kat >^..^< |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
I liked very much -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) I never know what to say when I reply to a poem, so ignore the lameness! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Letters from your heart" ~ Indeed!  I'd be heading back faster than a speeding locomotive if I were to receive a love letter like that!  They'd make great lyrics for a good ole country song!  EA |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Wow this is what happens when you don't check your email for a few days. katahdin: Thank you very much for reading and the bump. Means a lot to me for someone to go back like that, read, and feel that it's good enough to reply and bump back up. rosepetals36: Thank you dear. Earth Angel: Thank you very much for reading. And you are right I could see myself turning this into a song. Now I just need to pick up my guitar and figure it out. Hopefully the person that this was written for feels as strongly as you do. Thanks again everyone!! |
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