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katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-08-17 08:03 PM

I found your old love letter today
and I almost threw it away
Why keep something from the past
When your love didn't last

Or was it I who couldn't see
What you really meant to me
With trembing hands I couldn't decide
Should I take a peek inside

With warning bells I wouldn't heed
I opened the letter and begun to read
There was no hurt but love inside
All your feelings you did confide

A tear slipped freely down my cheek
Forever this letter I will keep
For it was I who set you free
But lover, you came back to me
Lucky, Lucky Me!

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-08-17 08:39 PM

Nicely written.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2010-08-17 11:26 PM

Thank you easy1
Kat >^..^<

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-08-18 06:57 AM

very nice...the story told well, your rhyme and meter good, a nice piece indeed..

I enjoyed

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2010-08-31 11:26 PM

excellent Kat!

Nocturnal Pulse
Member

since 2010-08-12

Posts 84
Australia

5 posted 2010-09-02 09:48 AM

Beautiful, good job again kat.

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

6 posted 2010-09-02 10:03 AM

Truly enjoyed reading this, Kat.

Nicely done.

~Sunkissed

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

7 posted 2010-09-02 08:16 PM

Thanks everyone for taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Thanks again!
Kat >^..^<

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2010-09-06 10:57 PM

Indeed...James

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

9 posted 2010-11-30 01:02 AM

As others have, I loved it. The end was especially meaningful. Thanks for sharing

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

10 posted 2010-11-30 01:23 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

11 posted 2010-11-30 03:18 AM

Hi Kat! This is very sweet... good to see you around again!

My best~
Amaryllis

A pile of scribbles here:
http://sharonleighpoetry.blogspot.com

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

12 posted 2010-11-30 04:48 AM

Thanks crosscountry83 for bumping this back to the top.
mikeandrew - glad you enjoyed my poem
Amaryllis - thanks for the nice comments, glad to be back even if it's an older post.
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

13 posted 2010-11-30 08:39 AM

Nice ending and that is good.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

14 posted 2010-12-02 05:20 AM

Fine writing, Karen. Its feels good to read letters from the past from loved ones for sure.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

15 posted 2010-12-02 06:29 AM

Lucky you Indeed. Flows wonderfully.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

16 posted 2010-12-02 11:53 PM

Great flow and well presented lucky!

Eric

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

17 posted 2010-12-07 07:45 PM

I really enjoyed this poem, especially the ending.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

18 posted 2010-12-07 10:34 PM

good stuff really liked it too.Lori

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