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Open Poetry #46
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anya
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since 2002-07-27
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London, UK
0 posted 2010-08-15 06:27 PM



Angels stare,
and Devils touch.
Best intentions...
by the wayside nonetheless.
No count to ten
No calm reflection
Feet first
I am Fallen
© Copyright 2010 Anne Hegarty - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-08-15 07:49 PM

How quickly it occurs indeed! Luckily, usually the Angels win over the devils!

Love your sharp poetic reflection, dear Anya!

Love,
Margherita
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2010-08-16 02:12 AM

Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793
3 posted 2010-08-16 03:52 PM

very tightly woven..while holding still the impact and message..
Nicely doen indeed... a pleasure to read
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