I cant feel my heart (internet love)

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Open Poetry #46

I cant feel my heart (internet love)

cynthiacullen
New Member

since 2010-08-14

Posts 7
California,USA

0 posted 2010-08-14 05:52 PM

I cant feel my heart today
its like its not there
isnt it suposed to beat to
feel,something. it dont

I'm awake I think
as I try to feel something
deep in my chest,I cant feel it
where is my heart I mean

It used to beat very
strong and fast I closed
my eyes and my heart skipps
a beat, wait what happed there?

As I opend my eyes and tried
to think of why,nothing came to me
I couldnt feel anothing again
for I wish I could just sleep.

As hours and days passed
and nothing in my chest
I finaly feel to sleep
I felt my heart race as I slept

I woke up sreaming and
gaspping for air as I
finaly, figgured out why
I couldnt feel my heart

When I'm awake I feel nothing
but you are everywhere I look
but ur not there to really
be seen -sighs-

And when I close my eyes
your there too,but when I sleep
your holding me in your arms
and it feels so right

It feels so real that my
heart starts to speed
for if I could only forever
sleep,I wouldnt miss you
they way that I do -sighs-
I know where my heart is know,
you took it with you

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

1 posted 2010-08-15 12:22 PM

I know exactly how this feels and you express it so beautifully. Very nice read.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2010-08-15 12:41 PM

Causes one to lose sight of reality.. wow

~Amaryllis

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

3 posted 2010-08-15 08:30 AM

As old Ben Kenobi might say, "That's the sand people for you. Let's find a safe place now."

Interesting write in both message and messenger (i.e., chatroom stylings, which I am surprisd I don't see more of with Internet poetry these days... lol, guess I don't get around enough, heh.)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2010-08-16 01:22 PM

well, I have had a few internet loves in my time and I know how this feels

well described!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2010-08-21 09:55 PM

I had a bad dream this morning and I wanted to get out of it...James

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