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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2010-08-11 08:24 PM



from far away I saw you
and i couldnt believe my eyes
the sexiest man alive
could it be love
in disguise???
  
dark hair and a careless look
in your eyes
wishing the moment
hadnt come as a surprise

hating to love you
and loving you still
crying with the daisies
on your window sill

reflections of memories
we never shared
waking up with the turtle dove
telling me its fair!

hoping u noticed
hoping you cared
knowing that in the end
its only love you feared!

© Copyright 2010 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-08-11 11:51 PM


Nice read,enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2010-08-12 06:53 AM


angel...pssst the old spice guy is just an actor...(grin)  enjoyed your lust ms
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-08-12 06:58 AM


enjoyed the read ma'am...

good example of not all we see is real, or what we think..

nicely done.

Nocturnal Pulse
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since 2010-08-12
Posts 84
Australia
4 posted 2010-08-12 09:10 AM


Lustful indeed, haha. Good work.
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2010-08-12 02:36 PM


Angel4aKing - enjoyed your thoughts in this write...

BC

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2010-08-12 11:58 PM


sometimes those sexiest men alive can be the ride of your life!

neat write here!

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