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tattoo blue & whiskey cathedral |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the old bar is still there in memory or at least the whiskey smells linger on the brown boards along the sidewalk across the street from a church where god used to watch our adultery on some saturday afternoon summers when you wore dresses and voyeurs and I wore jeans and tattoos sometimes we had that booth in the corner there by the window that made your skin shimmer and the whisper men talk about wanting but they were afraid of guns and knives so they left you to be my whiskey woman and just shook their heads those evenings when we were too obvious in parking lots beside freeways and wondered who was looking before we became love drunk invisible again _____________ daark |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
As naughty and irresistible as ever, dark  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... your words took me there... or maybe I've been there and just remembered..lol truly, a nice piece sir..enjoyed! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
bb-bel1e, thanks little one ______________ cpat...just off the 101, old buckhorn saloon...maybe I did see you there on occasion..thanks amigo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe it's the mood I'm in but this one sat down on me hard nicely done ds |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie...thanks for the read....hope the sit down was gentle eventually? |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is one of those poems that tattoo themselves on your soul. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Woooohoooooooooooo!!! You're in rare form DS~ Makes my heart go giddyup! |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
You captured a moment in time and I could see it or maybe I was a voyer. nice read Kat >^..^< |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks EB.. __________________ baby blue, glad you tried it on babe, thanks _______________________ kat, thank you for looking in the windows |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
Loved it. Sometimes the best memories are made in those old dark bars. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks jesse...very true |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The best premise to true bliss! When we are aware only of the love currents tying us together ... to leave traces forever, like tattoos yes! Works like an injection of youth! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms mar.. |
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