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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-08-11 06:56 AM

the old bar is still there in memory
or at least the whiskey smells linger
on the brown boards along the sidewalk
across the street from a church

where god used to watch our adultery
on some saturday afternoon summers
when you wore dresses and voyeurs
and I wore jeans and tattoos sometimes

we had that booth in the corner there
by the window that made your skin shimmer
and the whisper men talk about wanting
but they were afraid of guns and knives

so they left you to be my whiskey woman
and just shook their heads those evenings
when we were too obvious in parking lots
beside freeways and wondered who was looking

before we became love drunk invisible again

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daark

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2010-08-11 07:42 AM

As naughty and irresistible as ever, dark

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-08-11 07:50 AM

very nice... your words took me there...
or maybe I've been there and just remembered..lol

truly, a nice piece sir..enjoyed!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2010-08-11 07:58 AM

bb-bel1e, thanks little one

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cpat...just off the 101, old buckhorn saloon...maybe I did see you there on occasion..thanks amigo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2010-08-11 12:39 PM

maybe it's the mood I'm in but this one sat down on me hard

nicely done ds

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2010-08-11 03:35 PM

ms dixie...thanks for the read....hope the sit down was gentle eventually?

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

6 posted 2010-08-11 05:55 PM

This is one of those poems that tattoo themselves on your soul.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2010-08-11 08:03 PM

Woooohoooooooooooo!!!

You're in rare form DS~
Makes my heart go giddyup!

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

8 posted 2010-08-11 11:32 PM

You captured a moment in time and I could see it or maybe I was a voyer. nice read
Kat >^..^<

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2010-08-12 06:07 AM

thanks EB..

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baby blue, glad you tried it on babe, thanks

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kat, thank you for looking in the windows

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

10 posted 2010-08-12 04:59 PM

Loved it. Sometimes the best memories are made in those old dark bars.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2010-08-13 06:08 AM

thanks jesse...very true

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

12 posted 2010-08-14 05:45 AM

quote:
beside freeways and wondered who was looking

before we became love drunk invisible again

The best premise to true bliss! When we are aware only of the love currents tying us together ... to leave traces forever, like tattoos yes!

Works like an injection of youth!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2010-08-14 06:28 AM

thanks ms mar..

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