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Come What May
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Come What May |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
and so I write on, ride on go on, with my story in the quiet, in the vague fleeting starlight in the few moments of peace I steal in my little corner of the world on a small patio on the back side of a street, looking up, looking onward past the concrete past the hundreds of little windows that all lay empty and there are, there are a plenty now that the work day is done on the far side on the backside of the street and in those moments as sunlight fades and glades away the shadows change who knows how the heart is made in whatever splendor's foliage color will shade come the months, summer, fall, winter, spring to the month of May what then, shall those tender hearts say? what then, shall these tender hearts sing? |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Beautiful use of internal rhyme and assonance.. quite a dreamy little read, here!  ~Amaryllis |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
who knows how the heart is made in whatever splendor's foliage color will shade come the months, summer, fall, winter, spring to the month of May ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh how poetic of you to say so! What a nice scene you have painted with your poem.Lovin' it!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love those moments when the work is done for the day very lovely writing |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... indeed a moments reflection, a pause and the idea of continuation, of change and uncertainty, without... the dread or scold of heart. enjoyed |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed! There must be something magical about the month of May - it has popped up in my writing quite often. Helen |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
The month of May, my favorite month which also has my birthday, my 3 sister's birthdays, and my Dad's birthday. Enjoyed your poem. Kat >^..^< |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
martiniat8 - the month of May brings new beginnings. Nice write... BC |
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