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back road to bodie belle |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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snakey gown throat of long lady sighway bending remembering around knuckles handfulls of looking back mountains and a splinter of maybe creek whiskey we rocked our maple chairs there on pine the squeak sound on hollow over secrets gold dust was a light rain in ought nine but the mudbugs hid it in their innards hanging tree still bends in the winter as if the dying weight gives it anxiety too many boots it held in suspension to ever be majestic again except in fire god was a lady in a cameo with pearls sometimes with a garter she never removed for any miner but the mister of me she said and a few others when they had double eagles she said heaven only lasted til thirty three _______________ daark |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
she said heaven only lasted til thirty three enjoyed the look in Sir.. could hear the chairs on hollow pine, and see the sweet harshness of a heart beneath the sky... as always, both impressive, and insightful |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
so besides the title. ...my fav line: god was a lady in a cameo with pearls vintage. the stuff of legend. thoroughly enjoyed this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BB-bel1e...thannnnnnks little one, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's quite the back alley highway among the Spanish moss, Sir... I saw a side road where an old woman said "it could be right" and she angled an old finger toward her face... "except," she said, "it could last a little longer as to an age..." and then she cackled.  Well done! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thank you lady friend |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
 AHHH the irony of it!!! Very cute!!!! Still wondering y u and I have never met!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...perhaps we have and didn't know it? Thanks ms |
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