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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-08-09 09:34 AM


Once a huge beautiful statue
That showed the love between our souls that we shared
Now just colossal pile of beastly potter’s earth
Once my heart’s and soul’s one and only true attraction
Now a forsaken land in my life
That’s now starting to tarnish away to nothing
I may have giving my entire life to assemble
Only to be crushed by your lieing
Immediately sacrificed among
Our two quarreling hearts
Like an inadequate symphony of music
That’s prohibited  to be recognized by the public
All my hopes and dreams and my hearts desires
Crushed by your heart because you think everything is one big game
A big game that I can’t win….


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1 posted 2010-08-09 09:43 AM


some people only wish to play games..and games they alone can win or know the rules to...

nice read ma'am...

tattooedsweetheart07
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2 posted 2010-08-09 09:53 AM


Thank you dear... it means alot to me... I'll post more later
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3 posted 2010-08-09 11:27 AM



Dear Crystal, life is the only game, we have to play. Like chess, we always want to, check our mate, and hope that she is either a queen, or a king.

Nice job on this!
Richard xx

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