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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-08-01 07:57 PM


          such a moment

Soft, summer-scented longings
drift on a gentle evening breeze
that stirs the traceless moonlit
  shadows
to dance along this lake of dreams,
mirroring a  grand-resplendent mix
of towering clouds, endless stars,
and finest twilight memories
  of life and love
in such a moment…
stolen from eternity.

               --- b. e. adams (8/1/2010)





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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-08-01 10:33 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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2 posted 2010-08-01 11:42 PM


Your poetry is so beautiful.  Thank you.

Alison

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-08-02 01:13 PM


This is truly beautiful, Bruce. Such a pleasure to read.
                            Ida

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2010-08-05 11:37 PM


Your poetry often reads like a rare painting, you capture so much in words.

Beautifully penned, dreampoet~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2010-08-09 01:16 AM


*swoosh*

sigh


The Lady
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6 posted 2010-08-14 01:17 AM




beauty painted with words
as always

Amaryllis
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7 posted 2010-08-14 01:23 AM


How did I miss this.. gorgeous and tender.. and very moving...  well written, well done  
~Amaryllis

Margherita
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8 posted 2010-08-14 04:04 AM


Dear Bruce, you really bring majestic moments into life ... images and feelings in a perfect association.

Wonderful.

Love,
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
9 posted 2010-08-15 07:52 AM


drank deeply of this one Bruce...

"Soft, summer-scented"...
Nice!

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