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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2010-08-01 03:52 PM

Before the blaze of summer days,
...comes a new day's dawn,
When Helios lifts the veil of night,
...and shadows are begone.

A special time of thoughts sublime,
...when nature is at peace,
As creatures of the night retreat,
...in fall of night's surcease.

On Kansas plain, daybreak's refrain,
...sweet song of meadow's lark,
Looking forward, never back,
...no thought of midnight's dark.

I face the east and am released,
...from vestiges of night,
The calm of dawn doth cleanse my soul,
...with wash of dawning's light.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

1 posted 2010-08-01 05:42 PM

Very beautiful. It sounds like music.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-08-01 10:16 PM

A fine offering in both form and content. Thanks for sharing.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2010-08-01 10:59 PM

ahhh... fine work Tim

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-08-02 10:39 AM

very nicely done Sir..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2010-08-02 11:53 AM

It's great when we can share these, isn't it, Sir?

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-08-02 01:16 PM

What a great way to start my day, Tim.
Ida

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

7 posted 2010-08-03 01:21 AM

Very nice.

Twilight times both morning and evening are indeed special, and around here that morning "fall" might be the footfall (pawfall?) of a 'possum treading home to den to sleep...

*has 6 a.m or nearer flashback*

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2010-08-05 09:44 PM

A cleansing and soothing poem, I'm seeing lots of soft
light here, and it is just lovely...truly~

Jamesp85
Junior Member

since 2010-08-05

Posts 10

9 posted 2010-08-05 11:35 PM

Wow....very well put together.

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