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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2010-07-31 06:05 PM


                 ‘Deep-Time’ Dreams

Here in these fragrant forest vales and hills
amid ‘Deep-Time’ twilight songs and shadows,
each wander-heart is wrapped in gentle mountain
   moonlight  
and a boundless velvet cloak of star-tipped dreams.
The infinite clarity of such simple peace and beauty,
beyond all sham and drudgery of the ever-grasping
   world,
whispers softly to the careworn seeker's soul
of a far, far different and better way.
                
                   --- b. e. adams (7/31/2010)

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Honeybunch
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1 posted 2010-08-01 03:52 PM


It's a pity that the whispers aren't shouts because then more people may take notice.  "Simple peace and beauty" - a dream perhaps but a delightful one.

Helen

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2010-08-02 01:31 PM


A little glimpse of peace and beauty beyond compare, Bruce.
                              Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2010-08-02 03:38 PM


Thanks secondhanddreampoet,

I hope you get this.  Thanks for the write.

Bobby


2islander2
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4 posted 2010-08-04 02:26 AM


enjoyed my read. wonderful write.

regards

yann

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2010-08-10 10:29 PM


Exquisite scenery, and the sense of calm is just so beautiful...
loved this slow and gentle stroll through your dreams.

The Lady
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6 posted 2010-08-14 10:08 AM




your work wraps me in peace and beauty poet.

vandana
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7 posted 2010-08-14 10:37 AM


nice
Amaryllis
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8 posted 2010-08-14 12:56 PM


Gorgeous.. like a silken carress to read...
~Amaryllis

Misty Lilacs
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9 posted 2010-08-14 02:47 PM


Loved this! Beauty and Peace! Reminds me of my mountains.

ooxx  Mrti


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cynthiacullen
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10 posted 2010-08-14 05:58 PM


i love this
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