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Open Poetry #46

All of Me

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

0 posted 2010-07-27 11:23 PM

Can I have your name?
It's yours.
Take it away,
it's no earthly use to me.
Your glance,
your touch,
your scent.
Things I would rather possess.
Now I travel light,
as I give everything to you.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-07-28 03:25 AM

We give our all for love but it's not always returned. Nice read.
Kat >^..^<

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-07-28 08:09 AM

very nicely distilled..
"a rose by any other name".... it is the essene of feeling and you have indeed written it well.
I enjoyed :-)

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-07-31 01:33 AM

This was nicely written and left an impression.

Loveandlaughter
Junior Member

since 2010-07-24

Posts 13

4 posted 2010-07-31 02:06 AM

yes! love the ending

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-07-31 06:28 AM

I travel light too

good way to go

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2010-08-08 07:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

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