Open Poetry #46 |
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Lost Love |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I'm in pain It's my own doing My heart aches love, guilt and shame I hurt the one I love Life will never be the same My heart crys, I'm the only one to blame! Was my life worth it? Did I waste it away? I made too many mistakes It's my time to pay If only I could go back To start over would be oh so nice To do things right this time I would pay any price But life is not so forgiving Our time is slipping away Too much time has passed by You would never forgive me anyway |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Your road has been traveled by many and your words echo their combined loss. Your pain too shall pass, but there will always be the scar to remind... live and learn. Peace to you. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thank you Andrew Scott. I wrote this after my divorce. Kat >^..^< [This message has been edited by katahdin (07-27-2010 01:33 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kat...we all do look backs and whatifIdidthisover... usually tomorrow is a better window than yesterday..enjoyed your vibes ms |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed my read, as I know pain pass like clouds in the sky and sun appears back, thanks for the touchning share. regards yann |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Looking back...and playing the what if game, leads us to regrets. Looking forward, and learning from our mistakes, leads us to hope.. a universal set of emotions in this write....I doubt there are many if any of us who can not look back and see where we lost someone, where we made mistakes... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate well to this too bad we can't go back huh? |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
very well expressed, Kat, hope the pain is fading. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks everyone. It's been four years since my divorce and the pain has passed. I have a new man in my life and we are very much in love. He is a past love from 25yrs ago that came back into my life. Kat >^..^< |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Kat, you did things right the first time and it lead to where you are now very much in love and happy I enjoyed this read |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thank you Lady. Kat >^..^< |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
Sounds like you have the opportunity to do it over and correct the mistakes. How lucky you are to have an old love back in your life. I think relationships between old flames can be very special. ![]() |
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