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Red Red Snuggly Bear Fred
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Red Red Snuggly Bear Fred |
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The Sky is Imagination Junior Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 25OK, US |
You're always there to listen to me When my day has been pure misery You never judge, just sit and listen As I wring out all frustration You comfort and soothe as no one can As I furiously rave and rant You sit there with unfaltering smile And even while I'm fuming, all the while I know you'll be here to listen 'til the end My wonderful, red, red, snuggly bear Fred. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Cute poem. Sounds almost like a nursery rhyme. Kat >^..^< |
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Loveandlaughter Junior Member
since 2010-07-24
Posts 13 |
rare to find someone who can truly listen to your incessant ranting without reacting with negativity of their own.. whoever this person is, you are blessed that they are in your life.. many people could use someone like that |
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The Sky is Imagination Junior Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 25OK, US |
Thanks for the comments!  @Loveandlaughter Fred is quite literally a bear...of the teddy variety lol. I completely agree it's difficult to find someone who listens to you rant without judging or trying to offer advice. Sometimes when people rant to others, they just want to be heard, and aren't actually looking for advice, so that actually played a part in the conception of this poem. |
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