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tattooedsweetheart07
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0 posted 2010-07-21 10:13 AM


Your love is something I never thought I would find
Till the day our eyes met,
I had someone else who broke my heart in pieces
You listened to me and you saw me cry;
You showed me something that no one else could
One day you asked me why don't you do what your heart says is right,
So I left my life that was all full of hate and anger
But yes I still saw everything in black and white
My life was still full of hurt and guilt and shame,
You told me that things would be all right
Once I learned to rebuild my heart,
Which I thought was unfixable
I looked in your blue eyes and found the caring and love that I longed for,
You showed me that there was color in my life
I realized one night when you where holding me close,
That you rebuilt my heart and you sold it and locked it away
In a place that is safe from all harm
That is what all I got when I heard you say I love you

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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1 posted 2010-07-21 11:44 AM


as the hearts get older we just velcro them back together..part of the healing I think is learning mechanical skills.  you show healing and wounds unhealed here.  
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-07-21 03:01 PM


Yeah, what Dark said... it's sort of like stripping down an engine...you do it enough, you get pretty good at replacing the broken or worn parts, and it's always different when your through.


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